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             <h1>How To Use Your Email Client For Physical Mail</h1>
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-                Whether it's to re-read a conversation, find a plane ticket I ordered or check
-                when a meeting was planned, I often find myself looking up old emails. It's
-                usually easy to do so because email clients are designed for the task: Many of
-                them support full-text search and some even complement that with advanced
-                tagging and categorization systems. To be honest I have become completely
-                dependent on those features for my day to day operation. Having full-text
-                search and some sort of categorization for mail can be a huge time
-                saver. Wouldn't it be nice if we had all of that functionality to deal with
-                physical mail as well? I thought it would, so I set out to find a way to
-                achieve just that. Turns out it's pretty simple!
+                Whether it's to re-read a conversation, find a plane ticket I ordered or
+                check when a meeting was planned, I often find myself looking up old
+                emails. It's usually easy to do so because email clients are designed for
+                the task: Many of them support full-text search and some even complement
+                that with neat tagging and categorization systems. To be honest I have
+                become completely dependent on those features for my day to day
+                life. Having full-text search and some sort of categorization for email
+                can be a huge time saver. When it comes to physical mail however, I still
+                have to browse through stacks of paper to (hopefully) find what I'm
+                looking for. I figured that it'd be nice to use my fancy email client to
+                deal with physical mail as well, so I found a way to do just that. Turns
+                out it's pretty simple!
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